First Edit Sequence
Strengths: Quick cut scenes gives tension
Quick cut from driver and crash matches well
Quick cut from driver and crash matches well
Weakness: Wasn't clear how it crashed
Improve: Add the clip where it almost runs into the crates
Second Edit Sequence
Task?
Storyboard
Video
Strengths: Lots of clear cut scenes
Stairs and lift sort of blends together and matches
Stairs and lift sort of blends together and matches
Weakness: Ending a bit confusing
Improve: In the ending add the clip where the lady is watching through the window
+Already included
+Already included
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